dreadedcandiru2 (dreadedcandiru2) wrote,
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dreadedcandiru2

Thirty Seconds of failure.......

As I've said before, Lynn has given us a nonsensical excuse to explain why her storytelling has suffered a decline: she tells us that she only has thirty seconds to tell us what happens. If so, she isn't budgeting her time well. A person who actually did have only thirty seconds to tell a story wouldn't waste time on trivia like what an incidental character did when he was five; she would instead tell us important things about the main characters. She should have spent a lot more time trying to make Anthony look good instead of making the analogs of Rod and Aaron look bad. As it stands now, Liz just married an irritating whiner who'll turn into an ever more appalling schmuck when his biography comes up. The Kool-Aid drinkers may be content to be told and not shown that Liz and Anthony have chemistry but that's because they don't know that they too need to see proof. Some legacy, huh? Being praised by people for hoodwinking them.
Tags: lynn: failed creator
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